"writing contest"

[maestervincent]

I have discovered that most people have trouble with things such as spelling errors and grammar errors, if someone can write a piece that can impress me (I write books and poems), they will receive a prize- a game unreleased to the public internet made by me, and I must say that the game is rather epic as well, please do your best, if you lose, do not feel discouraged, Talking fully properly is ironically challenging in the united states for some persons.

Please participate, not for the prize, I want to see how intelligent my fellow staff are

[Eyesore]

None of us can TALK proper english?

[Eyesore]

Through the philosophical findings of the renowned philosophical authors such as Nietzsche and Heidegger, the philosophy known to some but to others as rational philosophical thought, a facet through which philosophical notions are brought forth to the philosophical advocates of modern philosophy, a certain philosophical aim must be reached through the philosophical speculations of philosophical intrigue by the philosophical studies of Aristotle, touching upon such philosophical subjects as temporality and being respectively, the philosophical aims manifest themselves, philosophically, upon this train of philosophical thought through which philosophical light sheds on the philosophy of profound existential, philosophical concepts that provoke philosophical thought. Penis.

[breakdancingrobot]

Well, I think I have the writing requirement to enter the contest, but I don't quite make the pretentiousness requirement. So, I guess I'll just sit this one out.

[maestervincent]

I know I don't think I'm supposed to try and win at my own contest, but, here's chapter 1 of the Nebanu Prophecy- Zero Hour:



CHAPTER #0001:
Discovering something... Big

Stephan listens to the same 50 cent track over and over, it's what he does everyday, he's listened to it so much he can recite all the lyrics in 30 seconds.

He turns the CD player off after listening to the track his daily 20 times, and turns on the TV.

No signal, just as the busted TV always does.
"Damn TV, stupid piece of crap." Stephan mumbles as he throws the remote at the Television, the signal came in.
"Woah," Stephan murmured, "It actually works for once!"
Picking up the remote, he switches to MTV.
No signal, it's not just the cable that's screwed up, as you will soon see.

"Oh, what the hell... The only channel working is the news channel!" Moaned Stephan as he switched to channel 10.

"...We now have live coverage on the scene, the Empire state building is down, I repeat.. The Empire State building has collapsed. New York is officially declaring a state of emergency!" The news reporter yelled through the microphone as the loud crumbling noises nearly make his voice inaudible.

Stephan's mouth opened wide, he responded to the news in awe, "What the hell? How did the Empire State building go down?"

The static was interrupting the Reporter's voice and was screwing up the speech, " We're also getting---- Rep---o--rts that the--- Stat--e of C----c---Alifornia is al--so Decla--a--aring a State of e-emergency."

The television short-circuited and sparked, the TV shut off.
The lights in the entire house began to shake and flicker.

Shocked, Stephan looked out the window, the sky was red.

"Holy Shiz! Where the hell is this comin' from?!" Stephan, worried, grabbed his coat and ran out the door. Soon, his house was stomped on by a large, what appeared to be a hand smashing the home like it was made of toothpicks.

A loud growling noise shook the ground, Stephan ran like there was no tomorrow.

[Chapter #001 Part 2]
Ren lay there crying, barely managing to mumble over and over, "How could they kill them? Why mom and dad? Why not me...?"

Julius walked over to Ren and hugged her tightly,
"It was their time, please Ren, we need to go, it'll be too late if we take our time."

"God Damnit, Julius, where the hell are we supposed to go?! Everywhere! They're EVERYWHERE!" Ren cried loudly.

"Military facilities are abandoned, their the most secure, so why not leave," Julius responded, " And besides, you don't want them to end you, right? You can get back at them soon enough, now come on! We have to go!"

Ren didn't budge, all she did was cry, look up at him and say, "Why did they kill our parents?"

Julius exclaimed, "There's no time to explain, we need to leave! You can ask questions later, sis!"

Julius grabbed Ren's Arm and picked her up, he brought her to the car and put her in a seat.
Starting the ignition and flooring the gas pedal, Julius bolted out of the driveway and told Ren,
" I don't know why they killed our parents, Ren, they just did, and we're gonna get revenge, don't worry."

Continuing to drive, they saw someone run by, Julius pulled down the window,
"Hey! Need a lift?!"
It was Stephan, he shouted back,
"Sure!"
He swung the back door open and hopped in.


Stephan asked,
"Do you know what the hell is goin' on?"
Julius responded,
"Of course not, do you think I'm Einstein? All we can do is hide in the abandoned CIA building!"

Stephan said no more, and they didn't even manage to get out of the car, they just slammed through the front of the CIA buliding and jumped out, running for the nearest room.

"Turn on the lights if you wanna see." Stephan gestured.

To their own amazement, they found out finally what the government was really hiding from us...

"Holy Shiz! What the hell are those?!"

Three giant robots, or what seemed to be, stood before them, each with a zodiac mark on their helmets.

"I don't know, but I'm willing to use one of 'em to get the hell outta here." Julius responded.

"Now I can get back at those bastards!" Ren dashed toward the mech with the Aquarius symbol and climbed in.
Her mech stood 1,200 feet tall, Stephan's stood 1,100, and Julius' stood 1,125, each towering, and full of power.

..More to come soon!

[JuggaloPIG]

well my friend, if you want someone who cant talk dont come to me, I suck at everything.... even speaking..

[maestervincent]

Nebanu Prophecy
CHAPTER 2 | REVENGE


"Ren! Don't get in, you don't know what it does!" Julius yelped.

"I know what I'm doing, calm down... I think I know what I'm doing.. erm..." Ren cluelessly pressed every button.
The towering mech turned to a wall, and the left arm lifted, the fist inverted and turned into a cannon of some sort, and blasted through the wall with no trouble at all.

"Geez!" Stephan was knocked back from the impact of the mech's movement. Ren stepped out and replied blankly,
"Julius, now you try."
Julius stepped into the Leo Mech, and he, like Ren, pressed buttons cluelessly.
A gold axe shot out of the right arm of the machine, and a double-barrelled machine gun popped out of the left hand.

"I wanna see what mine does!" Stephan cheered. Jumping in the saggitarius mech, Stephan punched the keyboard to see what happened. A green crossbow formed from the metal of the left fist, and a red/green spiked hammer formed out of the right hand.

"I think I know how to use this thing, I have the movement down, now, let's try and get our revenge!" Ren cried loudly.

(for help and INFORMATION on the mechs and what they look like, go to a.1asphost.com/hawkgames , go to the forum, and go to RM2K3 games/projects, go to NEBANU PROPHECY- ZERO HOUR, and they're shown.)

Ren Led the way, the Zero hour has begun.


"There's one of those ugly things!" Julius yelled, pointing the machine gun at it.

It turned toward him, anger in its eyes, it charged wildly toward Ren.

"Sis!" Julius jumped into the battlefront.
"I won't let you hurt her!" A slash of the axe and it stumbled back, only to charge forward again even faster.

Why did this happen? Why did this planet all of a sudden decline? So many questions, yet so little answers...
The world was crumbling, and nobody was there to save it but three people.

"Charge!" Stephan charged the mech toward the monster, and swung the hammer upward, sending the beast up high in the air.
"Ren, shoot it down!"
Ren aimed with the cannon and fired three times, sending the monster to the ground with a heavy slam.

It was dead, but many were left to come, and nobody would ever know if the once normal Planet run by God would ever be repaired...


....It's for them to know, and for us to find out...


|\[ TO BE CONTINUED ]/|

On the next part...
Will a girl from a far away planet be able to solve the problem she was nearly silenced for knowing about?

[Ethan Hawkeye]

I thought YOU started this contest, weren't you supposed to say congrats you win to someone months ago instead of just keep submitting your own work. heh, just seems a bit pointless in calling it a contest I guess.

[maestervincent]

These are samples, not considered work, just an example of what the structure should be, it should contain characters with different personalities, and to back it up, with a great story or plot.